Sunday, December 9, 2007

All rhyme, no reason

I want
a box of truffle
a brand new duffel
a house by the beach
some prunes and wild peach
looks that could kill
a vacation in brazil
a cute new hairdo
an ultra cool tattoo
all day shine
cheese,crackers and wine
an hour long shower
no withering flower
fantasy dream
diamonds that gleam
some vodka with lime
to make a better rhyme
at

16 comments:

  1. Karthik SriramDecember 09, 2007 12:09 PM

    4 posts in 5 days - kalakare chandru!!

    LKS

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  2. The KidDecember 09, 2007 4:31 PM

    I see a wine,
    I see a pine,
    but no its not mine,
    you didnt copy my rhyme!

    :)

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  3. AnonymousDecember 10, 2007 6:51 AM

    Good one! :--))

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  4. AnonymousDecember 10, 2007 6:51 AM

    Good one! :--))

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  5. SwethaDecember 10, 2007 9:58 AM

    Karthik, he he...avlo vettiya irukein !

    Kid, ofcourse not ! The rhyme is mine :-)

    SK, Danks :-)

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  6. AnonymousDecember 10, 2007 11:07 PM

    :). That what I call poetry. It rhymes. And when you say you want a vacation in brazil you actually mean it. You are not hinting at the poverty in brazil.

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  7. AnonymousDecember 10, 2007 11:08 PM

    P.S. Forgot to sign.

    -Ok

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  8. SwethaDecember 11, 2007 12:09 PM

    Ok, that's my excuse for a poetry too ;-) And when I say, a vacation in Brazil, I really mean it. Doesn't the amazon and rain forests sound exciting?

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  9. KD. K BodhiDecember 12, 2007 12:44 AM

    No no Dushtabudhi. What I meant is there is nothing more than what meets the eye. When you say you want a cool tattoo, you are not implying something. Its straightforward.

    So

    1. It rhymes
    2. Has only one simple meaning

    => Nursery rhymes and not poetry:).

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  10. AnonymousDecember 12, 2007 3:23 PM

    super da... it makes me to dream while reading

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  11. Gayatri BhadranDecember 13, 2007 7:51 AM

    SUPER! i'm dense with a capital D-E-N-S-E when it comes to poetry/rhymes.

    cant write one and i cant make sense of one either.

    but this one right here, i understood completely. so yaay to you for writing it and yaay to me for sprouting some brains. =D

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  12. SwethaDecember 13, 2007 8:26 AM

    Ok, don't call me dushtabudhi...that sounds so uncool ;-)

    Harini & Gayatri, he he..thanks :-)

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  13. Compassion UnlimittedDecember 14, 2007 5:43 PM

    Hi..First time here from Gayatri s blog..What a cool post.relaxing hmm some or lucky to enjoy and pen it too.
    True.dushti gives a better colour than Dhustabudhi..unique flavour !
    TC
    CU

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  14. cm chapDecember 20, 2007 6:19 AM

    Hey Swe... Hw r u?

    WOW... What a wish???

    an hour long shower - I did it today

    some prunes - I'm havg it rite now :-)

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  15. SwethaDecember 20, 2007 9:31 AM

    CM, he he...Am doing absolutely good.

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  16. Compassion UnlimittedJanuary 01, 2008 4:44 AM

    Hi...
    Wish you a very happy new year

    TC
    CU

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