a box of truffle
a brand new duffel
a house by the beach
some prunes and wild peach
looks that could kill
a vacation in brazil
a cute new hairdo
an ultra cool tattoo
all day shine
cheese,crackers and wine
an hour long shower
no withering flower
fantasy dream
diamonds that gleam
some vodka with lime
to make a better rhyme
16 comments:
4 posts in 5 days - kalakare chandru!!
LKS
I see a wine,
I see a pine,
but no its not mine,
you didnt copy my rhyme!
:)
Good one! :--))
Good one! :--))
Karthik, he he...avlo vettiya irukein !
Kid, ofcourse not ! The rhyme is mine :-)
SK, Danks :-)
:). That what I call poetry. It rhymes. And when you say you want a vacation in brazil you actually mean it. You are not hinting at the poverty in brazil.
P.S. Forgot to sign.
-Ok
Ok, that's my excuse for a poetry too ;-) And when I say, a vacation in Brazil, I really mean it. Doesn't the amazon and rain forests sound exciting?
No no Dushtabudhi. What I meant is there is nothing more than what meets the eye. When you say you want a cool tattoo, you are not implying something. Its straightforward.
So
1. It rhymes
2. Has only one simple meaning
=> Nursery rhymes and not poetry:).
super da... it makes me to dream while reading
SUPER! i'm dense with a capital D-E-N-S-E when it comes to poetry/rhymes.
cant write one and i cant make sense of one either.
but this one right here, i understood completely. so yaay to you for writing it and yaay to me for sprouting some brains. =D
Ok, don't call me dushtabudhi...that sounds so uncool ;-)
Harini & Gayatri, he he..thanks :-)
Hi..First time here from Gayatri s blog..What a cool post.relaxing hmm some or lucky to enjoy and pen it too.
True.dushti gives a better colour than Dhustabudhi..unique flavour !
TC
CU
Hey Swe... Hw r u?
WOW... What a wish???
an hour long shower - I did it today
some prunes - I'm havg it rite now :-)
CM, he he...Am doing absolutely good.
Hi...
Wish you a very happy new year
TC
CU
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